Haiku – Fall

The air of Autumn

Colors leaves of dying green

Gold, orange, and red

Comments

5 responses to “Haiku – Fall”

  1. unfetteredbs Avatar
    unfetteredbs

    love fall.. love the vision of color you paint

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you. This one takes a few reads to kind of get what I was going for. I’m glad you got it.

  2. cre8sound Avatar

    Yes, really lovely

  3. mary mageau Avatar

    A gentle, beautiful poem. I’d like to follow your blog and will visit again.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      By all means, follow along. I try to write outside the box with the subjects I use. I hope you enjoy them.