Haiku – Nature

Take a walk in me

Outside in my fresh cool air

as the seasons change

Feel the crunch of my

leaves under your walking foot

as you explore me

My Fall time of year

will soon fade into winter

I’m not as nice then

Spring though, will arrive

and then once again you can

take a walk in me

Inspired by the theme at

Comments

12 responses to “Haiku – Nature”

  1. Grace Avatar

    I love it ~ Simple images of crunching leaves to the fading winter ~ The seasonal change is perfectly illustrated ~

  2. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    Really? No walk in all seasons? 🙂

    Nature Paints

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks for the comment :]

  3. brudberg Avatar

    Love your seasonal twist. Though the winter is sometimes the best one. 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar

      For some – just not a winter person I’m a shorts and tee shirt kind of guy. My wife loves that season though. Thanks for the comment.

  4. laughwithme45 Avatar

    hope the winter will pass quickly for you! spring always holds such hope!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      It really does – love that warm time of year.

  5. readinpleasure Avatar

    What a wonderful set of haiku. Finely written.

  6. Joanne Moceri-Taveira Avatar

    I am not a cold weather aficionado either, but do love all the rest of the seasons..I like the use of nature’s first person telling..

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. I can handle the other three seasons, but count me out in winter. Hard to get outside when it is so cold.