Fragile
We are all
Like glass
Easily shattered
Life
Tumbles
Day in – Day out
We evolve
Revolve
Like the spinning door
Around and around we go
Our feet upon this Earth
Who knows?
How long?
We have
Is there life beyond?
A heaven
A hell
Who knows?
Like glass
We are all
Fragile
A Poetry Journey 
Comments
16 responses to “Poem – Fragile Rotation”
Nice. Easy to forget – until life goes awry x
So true.
Beautiful – reminds me of some poems I’ve written in the past – fragility is a common theme in some of my works.
It can be a very good muse to work with because you can take so many different angles with it.
I enjoyed this. We all do evolve and revolve on this earth…but I don’t know about feeling fragile. I will have to think about that for a while.
Thank you.
ah so true…life is fragile…and once we get there we will know what is next….hopefully we evolve and revolve…getting a little better each day…
brian miller
http://ww.waystationone.com
So true. Thanks for the comment.
Pondering life’s true meaning, questions passed down through the ages. Nicely captured.
Thank you.
Matches Brian’s events of late. Indeed true.
I thought it would fit perfectly with the post. We were suffering from a loss at the time I wrote it.
Yes, we are so fragile…and so it’s important to live fully in the present moment.
I couldn’t agree more. Thanks for the comment.
so true…we Are fragile…on some days i feel it more than on others… and we keep spinning…feet upon the earth… head in the clouds sometimes…? smiles
Yeah. I’ve really started to notice it since I became a dad – just how fragile life is.