A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Tree

Written by

AWR72

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For a hot day:

Please, take a shade break

Underneath my big green leaves

Escape from the sun

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For the apple tree:

I’ll hold your apples

Until my limbs get too tired –

and uninspired

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For the tree entering winter:

My leaves have fallen –

and my limbs are bare again

I can’t wait for spring

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Inspired by the theme at

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10 responses to “Haiku – Tree”

  1. prema (@pr_vk) Avatar
    prema (@pr_vk)

    very nice, simple and easy to visualise 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. MentalMakeovers Avatar
    MentalMakeovers

    The dedication coupled with the haiku was superlicious

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. I’m glad it was superlicious. 🙂

  3. unfetteredbs Avatar
    unfetteredbs

    nice set batman. I can’t wait for Spring already myself. You made me dream of green

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      The few days of running in the cold have me thinking of it as well. Thanks for the compliment.

  4. brudberg Avatar
    brudberg

    Very nice, really liked the uninspired apple tree.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  5. becca givens Avatar
    becca givens

    I love the direction and personification you used with each!! The apple tree is my favorite!
    Standing People

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you. I was kind of partial to that one myself.

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