Haiku – Wish

Do you have a wish?

Toss a penny in a well

Hope on fortune’s kiss

Inspired by the theme at

Comments

13 responses to “Haiku – Wish”

  1. Tarun Mazumdar Avatar

    I like it… i have written on similar lines.

    Wish Haiku

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks for the comment and the compliment.

  2. WabiSabi Avatar

    Ah… fortune’s kiss. I love the idea of being kissed by fortune!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. I do as well.

  3. heavenhappens Avatar

    Really simple and to the point but brilliantly so. I enjoyed this x

  4. Meenakshi Malhotra Avatar

    that’s cute and wonderfully put!

  5. MentalMakeovers Avatar

    EXCELLENTLY penned. Nice! Nice! Nice!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you. Thanks a lot.

  6. anonemouspoet Avatar

    for this reason I never read other’s work before I post – unless I explicitly post in response to someone’s work :o)

    presuming you didn’t read Tarun Mazumdar’s post first – of course not – but it is quite similar, but no less a great piece of writing

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Honestly I didn’t. I hadn’t even seen that blog before he posted on mine. I guess when you think wish a wishing well is one of the things that pops into mind. It was the first thing I thought of anyway. Strange how things work out like this. Thanks for the comment.

      1. anonemouspoet Avatar

        don’t worry – you weren’t the only one!