A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Shimmer

Written by

AWR72

in

A small rock skipping

Shimmer cuts the glass surface,

of a mountain lake

♥

Inspired by the theme at

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12 responses to “Haiku – Shimmer”

  1. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    It’s just like this. each shimmer radiates out from the stone strike. Very nice.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. Joanne Moceri-Taveira Avatar
    Joanne Moceri-Taveira

    I was brought to such a beautiful place and time….

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you so much for that compliment.

  3. WabiSabi Avatar
    WabiSabi

    This gave me a sense of the timeless serenity of this mountain lake!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you for the comment and compliment.

  4. Madeleine Begun Kane Avatar
    Madeleine Begun Kane

    How lovely!
    Madeleine Begun Kane

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  5. typewriterpoet Avatar
    typewriterpoet

    wow, I can see this in my minds eye, very eloquent indeed

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  6. McGuffyAnn Avatar
    McGuffyAnn

    Beautiful!
    McGuffy’s Reader
    http://www.mcguffysreader.blogspot.com

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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