Poem – Funny Little Monsters

Creeping, crawling, slithering along

Singing their sunny song

With their clicking, clacking claws

On the ends of their big hairy paws

They slither and shake

Through the darkness they quake

I wrote this earlier today and I honestly don’t know what to think about it.  I thought I would post it and see what you, fellow readers, thought about it.  I would aim this more towards kids like a Shel Silverstein poem with a drawing to go along with the small poem.

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10 responses to “Poem – Funny Little Monsters”

  1. Alice Keys Avatar

    It needs monster pictures with it. Even kids crayon monster pics would work. I thought “Snake? Dog? Snake?”

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I wish I could put pictures to my kid’s poems. I think it would help so much.

      1. Alice Keys Avatar

        Scanner? Add media?

      2. atothewr Avatar

        I never thought of that and my wife can do pen and ink drawings. That would work perfectly.

      3. Alice Keys Avatar

        A blog called ruleofstupid.wordpress.com puts little line drawing comics in his posts that can be quite funny. They’re simple but effective. I’m very low tech and only just got a free scanner from a neighbor this week. it could open up a whole new world… (in my spare time);-)

  2. typewriterpoet Avatar

    This is adorable monster pics would be cute

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I wish I could put them into this post.

      1. typewriterpoet Avatar

        you can, just use the edit and go in to the post nothing is set in stone for a post it can be changes without issue!

      2. atothewr Avatar

        I need to get my wife to draw up something so I can post it with my next one.

      3. typewriterpoet Avatar

        that would be cute, when you’re the re-edit should show up in the feed i hope she does something for it someday.