Poem – Unwelcome Guests

1

The clouds languish,

hang around

Like unwelcome guests,

they surround

2

My mood shifts,ย changes

Dreary day,

these unwelcome guests,

so cold and grey

3

Oh, unwelcome guests,

So full of dark today

Please, please, I beg of you,

go away

Comments

10 responses to “Poem – Unwelcome Guests”

  1. Beth Winter Avatar

    I have unwelcome guests as well. Perhaps together, our force will banish them. Well written

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you. Combined efforts always seem to work.

  2. Alex Barton Avatar

    I couldn’t agree more!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. Can’t wait for winter to just leave.

  3. typewriterpoet Avatar

    This could be my mantra I love this!

  4. unfetteredbs Avatar
    unfetteredbs

    go away indeed! Love the new look ๐Ÿ™‚ and come on sun and warmth!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I can’t wait for Spring to warm up again.

      1. unfetteredbs Avatar
        unfetteredbs

        will it? ever?

      2. atothewr Avatar

        I think it is finally changing to warmth next week. It always gets cold around Easter.