A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Incense

Written by

AWR72

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The man screamed in pain

Transformation burned and raged

In the full moon light

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The girl inhaled deep

Exhaled with cannabis bliss

Incense burning sweet

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Smell of rose aroma

Fills the small and tiny room

Vampire waits for dark

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Inspired by the theme at

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7 responses to “Haiku – Incense”

  1. ramblingsfromamum Avatar
    ramblingsfromamum

    2nd and 3rd Stanza for me – wonderful- thank you

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks for the comment and compliment.

  2. Neelam Dadhwal Avatar
    Neelam Dadhwal

    wonderful, aroma is filled in these haiku.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

      1. Neelam Dadhwal Avatar
        Neelam Dadhwal

        Thanks a lot.

  3. 4joyjoanne Avatar
    4joyjoanne

    the first had me thinking about the monks who immolated themselves in the late 60’s and ’70’s…..and the middle one – my hippie days (daze)…the last – sorry, sick of anything vampiric-al!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      I didn’t have monks in mind when I wrote the first one, but after reading it again I can see how that works. I’m a vampire fan, but I agree, they are starting to be everywhere these days. Thanks for the comment.

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