Haiku – Stone

Cast me from the shore

I skip across the water

My ultimate dream

Inspired by the theme at

Comments

11 responses to “Haiku – Stone”

  1. atothewr Avatar

    Reblogged this on Poem and Haiku and commented:
    You can find my latest Haiku at my other blog. Testing the waters to see if it might poetry might work better over there. Sorry if there is any confusion.

  2. LaTonya M. Baldwin Avatar

    we share an image and view.

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks, great minds think alike.

  3. Maggie Grace Avatar

    Wonderful perspective of the stone!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you.

  4. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    But we all know how this story really ends: not with skipping, but with sinking!

    Brick or Stone

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Very true, but at least it got a few seconds of skipping pleasure before it sunk.

  5. readinpleasure Avatar

    Wonderfully done

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you.

  6. Alice Keys Avatar

    I love this haiku. What a great picture. Life as a skipping stone. 😉 A response:

    soft hand smooth hard stone
    bouncing from water to air
    please fly me again

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I like that one as well. There is something so fun about skipping stones.