A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Ripples

Written by

AWR72

in

The memory drifts

Ripples the fabric of time

Watching ocean waves

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Inspired by the theme at

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9 responses to “Haiku – Ripples”

  1. WabiSabi Avatar
    WabiSabi

    Oh what a neat surprise! The memory rippling the fabric of time. Ripples

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks for the comment. Just trying to think of ripples in a different way.

  2. Nanka Avatar
    Nanka

    Lost in reverie I could jump continents!! Pleasant thoughts and wonderful memories!!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  3. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    I very much like the ripples in the fabric of time.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. I had that line in my head and I had to find a way to work it in.

      1. Alice Keys Avatar
        Alice Keys

        We’ve been plagued and blesses with extra wrinkles in the fabric of time recently. Amazing how these work. 😉

  4. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    powerful imagery

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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