A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Big Game

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AWR72

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Like a wilted rose

She hangs her head, softly weeps

Her team defeated

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10 responses to “Haiku – Big Game”

  1. oneofaclass Avatar
    oneofaclass

    “Like a wilted rose” – great image!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  2. Nanka Avatar
    Nanka

    I can see the wonderful comparison and the depth of the feeling too!!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  3. artisticboy Avatar
    artisticboy

    A person succeeds only after failing. Wonderfully expressed.
    Gaurang

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you for the comment.

  4. Sumana Roy Avatar
    Sumana Roy

    nice haiku…..

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  5. Joanne Moceri-Taveira Avatar
    Joanne Moceri-Taveira

    very nice…

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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