A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Gold

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AWR72

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Cool early autumn

Gold amber light permeates

The day fades to black

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Inspired by the theme at

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12 responses to “Haiku – Gold”

  1. Kalpana Solsi Avatar
    Kalpana Solsi

    Gold amber light permeates. lovely words.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. poetrydiary Avatar
    poetrydiary

    This is a good one – nice contrast in the last line.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks for the comment.

  3. Usha Menon Avatar
    Usha Menon

    A nice on the advent of Autumn.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      It is such an inspirational time of year.

  4. Sumana Roy Avatar
    Sumana Roy

    nice lines..

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  5. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Wonderful contrast. Vividly done!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  6. Hafiz Pathan Avatar
    Hafiz Pathan

    fantastically done

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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