A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Rivulet

Written by

AWR72

in

A small tiny stream

Splashing over tiny rocks

Dreams of bigger things

Comments

9 responses to “Haiku – Rivulet”

  1. Loco mente Avatar
    Loco mente

    I loved the 3rd line…
    Very meaningful…

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. inky waves Avatar
    inky waves

    This is lovely; serene, but hopeful

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  3. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    I like the personality of this rivulet. You inspired a response poem:

    dreams of bigger things
    but as the day grows hotter
    stream get smaller

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Very good, always enjoy your haiku replies.

      1. Alice Keys Avatar
        Alice Keys

        I love our poetic conversations. Thanks.

  4. poetrypea Avatar
    poetrypea

    The whole composition fits beautifully together.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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