A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Sunrise Glances

Written by

AWR72

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Kiss me with dew drops

The morning said to the night

Then leave me to shine

†

Comments

19 responses to “Haiku – Sunrise Glances”

  1. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Ah, beautiful!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. oneofaclass Avatar
    oneofaclass

    Very nice – I like the idea of morning speaking to night.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  3. Sumana Roy Avatar
    Sumana Roy

    beautifully written…

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  4. Sanjida Shaheed Avatar
    Sanjida Shaheed

    This makes me empty and hopeful at the same time. There is the suggestion of both a farewell and a new beginning.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Interesting way to look at it. It really is a start and a finish all in one. Thanks for the comment.

      1. Sanjida Shaheed Avatar
        Sanjida Shaheed

        You are welcome!

  5. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    nice!!!

    much love…

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  6. CuriositytotheMax Avatar
    CuriositytotheMax

    One of my very favorite “Dew” Haiku! Perfect and charming.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you so much.

  7. poetrypea Avatar
    poetrypea

    What a great idea

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks for the comment.

  8. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    Shining!

    Desert Dew

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  9. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    Fabulous.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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