A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Webbed Feet

Written by

AWR72

in

Duck paddles and swims

Cuts sharp through the lily pads

Searching for some food

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5 responses to “Haiku – Webbed Feet”

  1. milan rajkumar Avatar
    milan rajkumar

    its an original ! a traditional haiku ! sublime !

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

      1. milan rajkumar Avatar
        milan rajkumar

        welcome !

  2. Leigh W. Smith Avatar
    Leigh W. Smith

    Idyllic, and really contrasts most of the other haiku (including, definitely, mine!). I love the placidness of the scene, and as the other commenter said, this really epitomizes a traditional haiku with both word choice and setting. Great work!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you. Always nice to hear kind words like that.

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