A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Mr. Skeleton and Green Tears

Written by

AWR72

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Mr. Skeleton:

White flesh free fingers

Tearing through the soft brown dirt

Time for its revenge

Green Tears:

Mother Nature’s Bones

Exposed, beaten, and broken

by man’s pollution

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Comments

13 responses to “Haiku – Mr. Skeleton and Green Tears”

  1. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Thoughtfully written haiku set.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  2. oneofaclass Avatar
    oneofaclass

    I like the creepiness of Mr. Skeleton.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  3. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    nice;

    have a good day

    much love…

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks – will do and you too.

  4. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    Yes.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  5. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
    Cheryl-Lynn

    Oh this is quite clever and so true!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  6. milan rajkumar Avatar
    milan rajkumar

    woosh ! the first one is a thriller ! yet the second one is so philosophical !

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Trying to show a couple of different takes on this word. Glad you liked them.

      1. milan rajkumar Avatar
        milan rajkumar

        o yes ! you just did it !

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