Haiku – Down by the River

Laying on the bank

In a pocket of deep shade

Leaves give me shelter

Comments

7 responses to “Haiku – Down by the River”

  1. CuriositytotheMax Avatar

    VERY nice how you paint the picture of the branch without using the words.

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks again.

  2. Bastet Avatar

    Nice … a beautiful image.

  3. milan rajkumar Avatar

    its beautiful ! a picturesque description !

      1. milan rajkumar Avatar

        welcome ! hope you read my haiku of the same prompt !