A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Stranded in the Rain

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AWR72

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Long black empty road

Out of gas, alone, tired, cold

Branch snaps in the dark

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10 responses to “Haiku – Stranded in the Rain”

  1. CuriositytotheMax Avatar
    CuriositytotheMax

    ooooooOOOO – I like your branch snapping! — i could hear it.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. Just conjured up all those old Slasher movies I saw back in the day.

  2. Bastet Avatar
    Bastet

    Yipes .. a scarryku! I enjoyed the chill very much!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  3. cheryl Avatar
    cheryl

    I’d be definitely looking around,

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Me too. I’d probably jump out of my skin as well.

  4. milan rajkumar Avatar
    milan rajkumar

    wow another thriller ! spine chilling….!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. Trying to do something a bit intense with this one.

      1. milan rajkumar Avatar
        milan rajkumar

        yes its very thrilling indeed !

      2. milan rajkumar Avatar
        milan rajkumar

        its intense and spine chilling too !

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