A Poetry Journey

2 Looks at Space

Written by

AWR72

in

Infinite blackness

Stretching far beyond the stars

Into the unknown

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Claustrophobia

Confined in a tight dark space

Buried under dirt

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Comments

10 responses to “2 Looks at Space”

  1. oneofaclass Avatar
    oneofaclass

    I like the creepiness of the second one!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. Glad you liked it.

  2. Payal Agarwal Avatar
    Payal Agarwal

    oops! I am claustrophobic. nice set of haiku..

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. Yeah, I am a bit as well.

  3. J Avatar
    J

    I loved them both — great takes on “space” — the second one gave me the shudders!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  4. Oliana @Tracesofthesoul Avatar
    Oliana @Tracesofthesoul

    I love the two extremes of each space!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  5. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    I hope never to be buried, but merely scattered to the four winds!

    Desolate Space

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      I’m starting to think the same way.

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