Haiku – Haunted House

Just enter my doors

Try to find the roaming ghosts

The ones who haunt me

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Tough one this week. I’m not even sure if this Haiku works or not.

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This weeks word is “Try.”

A short story about five students on Halloween night who discover the secrets and terrors of the town's most infamous haunted house.
A short story about five students on Halloween night who discover the secrets and terrors of the town’s most infamous haunted house.

Comments

5 responses to “Haiku – Haunted House”

  1. Alice Keys Avatar

    You poem is inspired, inspiring and absolutely haunting. 😉

    he one who haunts me
    dead forty years ago but
    drifts my midnight heart

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks for the comment and Haiku – haunting as well.

      1. Alice Keys Avatar

        You a funny guy. 😉

  2. merlinspielen Avatar

    Oh that is good. Tough prompt and you found a way to make it work!

    try to run away
    whispers of winter follow;
    STOP possessing me!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      It was very tough to come up with this one and I like your Haiku – creepy.