Haiku – Fire of Desire

Secret lovers meet

A dark seedy motel room

Hot burning passion

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2 shots in the night

Figure races from the scene

The motel room burns

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For more prompts like “fire” go here: Haiku Horizons

Comments

17 responses to “Haiku – Fire of Desire”

  1. sherry fundin Avatar
    sherry fundin

    Somebody was naughty. LOL

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Big time! Funny thing, this one popped into my head because of an X-Files episode I watched last night.

      1. sherry fundin Avatar
        sherry fundin

        Guess that shows that inspiration can come from anywhere. 🙂

      2. atothewr Avatar

        So true. Hope you had a great weekend.

      3. sherry fundin Avatar
        sherry fundin

        I had a fantastic and busy weekend. Hope yours was great too.

  2. Archana Kapoor Avatar
    Archana Kapoor

    aha 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Yep. Caught red handed.

  3. readinpleasure Avatar

    You’ve given us a complete story. Wonderful. 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you so much.

  4. thewhisperingpen Avatar

    Love these! It reminds me of any number of books I like to read! Thanks for sharing!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Anytime. Always trying to do something a bit different.

  5. kokilagupta Avatar

    Thats a haiku novel! layered characters.. action !

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

  6. Alice Keys Avatar

    I love when an entire work of fiction can be captured in haiku. Good work.

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you so much.