A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Park View

Written by

AWR72

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Sitting on a bench

Watching his son as he plays

Time goes way too fast

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Inspired by this picture at A Prompt Each Day.

Image Source: Park Bench WPC by Wayne Ray(via Wikimedia Commons).

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Comments

12 responses to “Haiku – Park View”

  1. vinnieh Avatar
    vinnieh

    I like this haiku.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  2. menons129 Avatar
    menons129

    The son will enjoy playing here.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      I’m sure he would. Give him a park and he is good to go.

  3. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Nicely done. 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks.

  4. Mandy Moore (@MandyAFM) Avatar
    Mandy Moore (@MandyAFM)

    it does move by so quickly! This poem speaks to the heart of any parent!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      It really does. It is like a bullet train when you have kids.

  5. thewhisperingpen Avatar
    thewhisperingpen

    Sigh…time certainly gets away from us.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      It really does.

  6. DELL CLOVER Avatar
    DELL CLOVER

    Indeed it does pass too quickly.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Yeah, it goes way too fast.

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