Haiku – Noisy Sunrise

Loud morning thunder

Day starting, cool, bright, and clean

Heavy rain shower

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Comments

15 responses to “Haiku – Noisy Sunrise”

  1. kokilagupta Avatar

    Loved it ..totally 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you.

  2. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    We would so welcome some thunder—at any time of day—here in the desert!

    Rocky Road/Fresh Winds

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I can imagine. Probably stays pretty dry.

  3. September Last Avatar

    Oh how I long for a thunder shower!!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Had a lot more this year than last. Nice to see some green grass in the summer here.

  4. menons129 Avatar

    Nice and refreshing Haiku.

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you.

  5. Alice Keys Avatar

    Nice poem. Get a strong pump and a long pipe and send us some of that water. 😉

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I wish I could. I know you need it.

  6. Archana Kapoor Avatar
    Archana Kapoor

    superb!! 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you.

  7. milan rajkumar Avatar

    How fresh ! though the word is well hodden . !!! Lovely.

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thank you.