A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Float

Written by

AWR72

in

Adrift on the sea

Tide guiding the small brown boat

Going where it leads

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For more prompts like “float” go here: Haiku Horizons

Comments

11 responses to “Haiku – Float”

  1. fuonlyknew Avatar
    fuonlyknew

    Sounds like a perfect day:) I love being on the water.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      I would love to be today.

  2. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    I love your oceanic metaphor. Our lives in our little boats move as if pulled by tides.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      They really do. Each and every day.

      1. Alice Keys Avatar
        Alice Keys

        Yes. 🙂

  3. Archana Kapoor Avatar
    Archana Kapoor

    lovely… just perfect! 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  4. Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16) Avatar
    Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16)

    Would love to be in that boat today! Awesome. 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  5. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    Is it really a wise idea to follow a drifting boat? 😉

    On a Parade Float

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Probably not.

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