Haiku – Trap in the Air

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15 responses to “Haiku – Trap in the Air”

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   September 28, 2015

   Curious to the Max

   I love the “lilt” of the first line with the “punch” of the last line!
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      September 28, 2015

      atothewr

      Thank you. Inspiration came right outside my window.
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   September 28, 2015

   sunainabhatia

   nicely put….
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      September 28, 2015

      atothewr

      Thanks.
3. 

   September 28, 2015

   Suzanne

   Your haiku made me shiver –
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      September 28, 2015

      atothewr

      Thanks – trying to set an early Halloween mood.
4. 

   September 29, 2015

   milan rajkumar

   Captivating !
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      September 29, 2015

      atothewr

      Thank you.
5. 

   September 29, 2015

   adaspoetryalcove

   perfect description!
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      September 30, 2015

      atothewr

      Thank you.
6. 

   October 2, 2015

   Archana Kapoor

   stark reality of life!! 🙂
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      October 2, 2015

      atothewr

      Thank you so much.
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   October 4, 2015

   Alice Keys

   Quite a nice seasonal haiku.
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      October 5, 2015

      atothewr

      Thank you.
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         October 5, 2015

         Alice Keys

         🙂