A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Banshee Breeze

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Wicked wind screaming

Trees violently shaking

Angry air today

For more prompts like “storm” go here: Haiku Horizons

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12 responses to “Haiku – Banshee Breeze”

  1. Archana Kapoor Avatar
    Archana Kapoor

    very vivid 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    I can feel the anger…

    After the Dust Storm

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      I think this is the fourth day in a row of heavy wind.

  3. Emily Thrasher Avatar
    Emily Thrasher

    There is something sinister about this Haiku. It is angry and yet I got a great deal of imagery from it, as if I was caught in a violent wind storm fighting off leaves and other debris. Very good!
    Link to my Haiku: http://psychandmom.blogspot.com/2015/10/haiku-horizons-3-different-storms.html

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks for the comment.

  4. danielschwamm Avatar
    danielschwamm

    Very angry! 😛 A natural temper tantrum.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Very natural. It seemed angry here for a few days.

  5. fuonlyknew Avatar
    fuonlyknew

    It blew like that here last night. Kind of creepy.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      It was relentless. Went on for four or five days straight in N.C.

  6. milan rajkumar Avatar
    milan rajkumar

    strong vivid imagery ! I can feel it too !

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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