Haiku – Riches

Quick and easy job

Crooks knocking over a safe

Hoping for treasure

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Comments

10 responses to “Haiku – Riches”

  1. Bekkie Avatar

    Did they find it? Nice write!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. I see it more as three bumbling crooks trying to get at it but failing miserably.

  2. fuonlyknew Avatar
    fuonlyknew

    Bad bandits. LOL

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Yeah. I don’t think it turns out well for them.

  3. Archie Avatar
    Archie

    what was the outcome? I am intrigued….

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I see them stumbling about. Maybe getting caught in the end.

  4. livebysurprise Avatar

    Well…I’m secretly rooting for them.

    1. atothewr Avatar

      I don’t think it turns out too well. I see a lot of mishaps.

  5. milan rajkumar Avatar

    O its so modern , and full of suspense!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. I think those crooks have some surprises in store for them as well.