A Poetry Journey

Sidlak: Talking Tropics

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Thank you for the inspiration Quirky Shine: quirkyshine.wordpress.com

*Sidlak poetry (sid/lak) is a structured poetry consisting of 5 lines with 3-5-7-9 syllables AND A COLOR. The last line must be a COLOR that describes the whole poem or the feelings of the writer.

Ocean side

Sitting with my toes

Firmly planted in the sand

Underneath a loud flapping palm tree

Blue

That’s my first attempt at Sidlak Poetry. I would love to hear some thoughts on it and I would love to see what you can do. Post your Sidlak poem either in the comments section or your own blog. Swing back over and leave me your link so I can check it out.

Great version of this Buffett classic.

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7 responses to “Sidlak: Talking Tropics”

  1. fuonlyknew Avatar
    fuonlyknew

    I like it. Just might try this myself:)

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      It is a nice way to expand the Haiku format.

  2. quirkyshine Avatar
    quirkyshine

    Perfect for summer season… wow indulging the sand… wow perfect!!! another perfect sidlak here… bless your heart my dear friend 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks. You inspired me. I’ll have to write some more.

      1. quirkyshine Avatar
        quirkyshine

        Please do as I am going to share it in the group where sidlak all started 🙂 be well 🙂 You are most welcome 🙂

      2. atothewr Avatar
        atothewr

        What group? Can you send me a link?

      3. quirkyshine Avatar
        quirkyshine

        Yes sure no problem 🙂 will email it 🙂

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