Under lock and key
Her heart held in rusted chains
Life full of abuse
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I also had two other closing lines for this one. Curious what you guys thought of them. Do you think either one of these would have been a better way to close this Haiku?
Waiting on her prince
Captive of abuse
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4 responses to “Haiku – Tears and Pain”
A sad one.
Yeah. Kind of just came to me like that.
I like it sad but true
never stop ding what you love