Haiku – Vampire’s Bite

Yes, commit to me

He said as he held her tight

Exposing his fangs

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For more prompts like “commit” go here: Haiku Horizons

Comments

2 responses to “Haiku – Vampire’s Bite”

  1. Nimi (@13nimi) Avatar

    Love your take on ‘commit’, with a touch of sinister to it. Surprisingly it made me smile. I am trying to figure it out myself 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar

      That is surprising, but understood. I find myself smiling at the oddest of times as well. Thanks for the comment.