Haiku – 3 Looks at Cake

A small birthday cake

Decorated with candles

Time to make a wish

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Blushing bride and groom

Sharing a small piece of cake

On a happy day

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She looked at the cake

Decided to cut a slice

It started to bleed

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For more prompts like “cake” go here: Haiku Horizons

Comments

6 responses to “Haiku – 3 Looks at Cake”

  1. The Abject Muse Avatar

    Whoa! Nice job. Number 3 is kickin’!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. Yeah I like to throw in some horror. Glad you liked it.

      1. The Abject Muse Avatar

        Horror is good. I like it too.

  2. milan rajkumar Avatar

    The first and second are sublime … and the third word one ….arrrrggg , it’s your signature ….vivid and horrifying .

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. I am glad to horrify you.