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Sunrise approaching
Birds singing in the darkness
Welcome a new day
Here, too. The sun evicted the rain from the morning sky. A wren (or swallow?) is chirping nearby. Whoa, that could be a haiku: The sun evicted The rain from the morning sky A wren chirps nearby
Yours is better.
Great Haiku. Always enjoy what you come up with.
Beautiful
Thanks.
Welcome 🙂
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Here, too. The sun evicted the rain from the morning sky. A wren (or swallow?) is chirping nearby. Whoa, that could be a haiku:
The sun evicted
The rain from the morning sky
A wren chirps nearby
Yours is better.
Great Haiku. Always enjoy what you come up with.
Beautiful
Thanks.
Welcome 🙂