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Soft, gentle stirring
Among the rooms thick darkness
Something is moving
Aw, geez, I’m reading this in the dark! Eek! (Excellent haiku!)
Thanks. I wrote this while in bed this morning. Heard a weird noise, looked out into the dark, and inspiration struck.
Very cleverly evoked in 17 syllables!
Amazing what runs through your head when you hear a bump in the night.
Oh definitely! Always make sure you have a pencil and paper to hand.
Yep. Or phone.
Very true! 🙂
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Thanks.
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9 responses to “Haiku – 7/20/2020”
Aw, geez, I’m reading this in the dark! Eek! (Excellent haiku!)
Thanks. I wrote this while in bed this morning. Heard a weird noise, looked out into the dark, and inspiration struck.
Very cleverly evoked in 17 syllables!
Amazing what runs through your head when you hear a bump in the night.
Oh definitely! Always make sure you have a pencil and paper to hand.
Yep. Or phone.
Very true! 🙂
[…] https://apoetryjourney.wordpress.com/2020/07/20/haiku-5-20-2020-2/ […]
Thanks.