Haiku – 7/20/2020

Soft, gentle stirring

Among the rooms thick darkness

Something is moving

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9 responses to “Haiku – 7/20/2020”

  1. Priscilla Bettis Avatar

    Aw, geez, I’m reading this in the dark! Eek! (Excellent haiku!)

    1. A Renfro Avatar

      Thanks. I wrote this while in bed this morning. Heard a weird noise, looked out into the dark, and inspiration struck.

  2. d.a.simpsonwriter Avatar

    Very cleverly evoked in 17 syllables!

    1. A Renfro Avatar

      Amazing what runs through your head when you hear a bump in the night.

      1. d.a.simpsonwriter Avatar

        Oh definitely! Always make sure you have a pencil and paper to hand.

      2. A Renfro Avatar

        Yep. Or phone.