Loud morning thunder
Day starting, cool, bright, and clean
Heavy rain shower
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For more prompts like “fresh” go here: Haiku Horizons

Loud morning thunder
Day starting, cool, bright, and clean
Heavy rain shower
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For more prompts like “fresh” go here: Haiku Horizons
Abundance of sun
Parted clouds opened up wide
Revealing blue skies
Thunder and lightning
Nature’s electrical dance
Those are the first two lines. Now, I need some help figuring out how to close this Haiku. I like all three of these lines, but I’m not sure what best fits it.
Here are the lines.
A. Takes two to tango
B. Across tonight’s sky
C. Across the night sky
Any thoughts as to which one is your favorite? Can you think of another line to close it with?
I’m leaning more towards A. myself.
Living out your dreams
Day by day, one forward step
Till we reach the end
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For more daily prompts go here: A Prompt Each Day
Maintain your patience
Teaching your children through life
Takes a parent’s love
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For more prompts like “calm” go here: Haiku Horizons
ALERT – ALERT – ALERT
SELLING SIDEBAR
I know this has nothing to do with the post, but I just released “Joyride” back onto Kindle. I thought some of you out there might like to read it – especially any dads (or moms) reading this post.
(Revised and Updated: 2015) A Joyride in a Chevy Chevelle. The car was just sitting there for the taking. What could possibly go wrong? Vinnie and Mike are about to find out what can and will go wrong once they turn the key. Evil awaits. Ride shotgun if you dare with this short story.
Reviews:
4 out of 5 Stars – Joy for the Reader
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Night time rain shower
Rolling gently off the roof
Putting me to sleep
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I hope you guys have a Happy 4th!
Sitting on a bench
Watching his son as he plays
Time goes way too fast
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Inspired by this picture at A Prompt Each Day.
Image Source: Park Bench WPC by Wayne Ray(via Wikimedia Commons).
Hanging on the tree
Sharp green of spring and summer
The color of fall
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For more prompts like “leaf” go here: A Prompt Each Day
Fill the world with love
Let your radiance shine through
People will respond
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Inspired by A Prompt Each Day

A rose has two sides
Cut by its sharp sticky thorns
Kissed by its beauty
For more prompts like “thorn” go here: Haiku Horizons

Face on the window
Made up of liquid droplets
Staring back at me
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I’m hoping to re-publish this short story today – 6/26/2015.
Stay tuned for freebies and places to purchase it.
Watching thunderstorms
Rolling in as night returns
Lightning cuts the black
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The first one: In the Distance
Shed a happy tear
For all the parents out there
Tough, rewarding job
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For more prompts like “tear” go here: Haiku Horizons
Sunshine and blue skies
Like a hot burning fire
Day starting to bake
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I wrote this one this morning when my son and I went out for a walk to the park. I thought we went early, but by the time we got home at 9:15 we were sweating buckets. The site A Prompt Each Day had the word “fire” as the prompt for the day, and I thought this Haiku would fit that prompt perfectly.
Man picks up his cell
Hoping the ring was not heard
Strange voice on the phone
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For more prompts like “secret” go here: Haiku Horizons
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