Salty water moves
Undulating to the shore
Sailor’s lullaby
Tag: Sunset
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Haiku – Sky Fire 9
Red, blue, light-gray sky
Sunset burning into night
Daylight takes a break
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The rest can be found here: http://wp.me/p2kmxm-2Zh
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Haiku – Sky Fire 7
A pewter grey sky
Mixed with mirror shards of red
Clouds filled with fire
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More from this series:
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Haiku – Gold
Cool early autumn
Gold amber light permeates
The day fades to black
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Inspired by the theme at
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Haiku – Sandy Feet
Edge of the shoreline
Toes touching the water’s warmth
As the red sun sets
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Haiku – Sky Fire 6 (Re-Write)
Sunlight cascading,
fading, into nighttime’s grasp
Evening sky bleeds
After publishing this earlier today I realized two things, the last line had six syllables in it (evening is three not two) and I also wasn’t a big fan of the way I closed the original – Evening sky turns red.
I went ahead and made the changes and then published it the way I think it should have gone out, originally. Us poets, so neurotic, we have to get it right.
Thank you for reading. You are now free to move about the blog.
Here is the original Part 6: http://awrenfro.com/2013/02/25/haiku-sky-fire-6/
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