Haiku – Christmastime – Part 3

Part 1

Christmastime of year

With a soft white snow falling

Killer spies his prize

Part 2

Cold and all alone

With presents of red and green

She hurries inside

Part 3

Killer makes his move

Jingle bells, detective sees

Feet rush through the snow

Comments

2 responses to “Haiku – Christmastime – Part 3”

  1. unfetteredbs Avatar
    unfetteredbs

    I love the suspense you are building.. and with such few words!

    1. atothewr Avatar

      Thanks. I was hoping it would work like that. Good to hear it is.