A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Breeze

Written by

AWR72

in

With toes in the sand

Memories breeze through my mind,

of childhood beach trips

🙂

Inspired by the theme at

Comments

10 responses to “Haiku – Breeze”

  1. bodhisattvaintraining Avatar
    bodhisattvaintraining

    nice one! 🙂

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  2. Alice Keys Avatar
    Alice Keys

    “Breeze through mind” is a good image.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thanks for the comment. I was on the fence about it so I’m glad it worked.

  3. typewriterpoet Avatar
    typewriterpoet

    this absolutely speaks to my heart!

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you so much. Love those beach trips.

  4. McGuffyAnn Avatar
    McGuffyAnn

    This is very bittersweet.

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

  5. E. Obih-Frank (@positive_kismet) Avatar
    E. Obih-Frank (@positive_kismet)

    Beautifully executed haiku.
    Eliz

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      Thank you.

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