A Poetry Journey

Haiku – Rain on the Window

Written by

AWR72

in

Dreary dark cool day

Green leaves fading to yellow

Autumn arrival

Comments

7 responses to “Haiku – Rain on the Window”

  1. AJ Avatar
    AJ

    I would slightly change it if I were you to make it a proper haiku and rhyme the last verse with first… You are the author of course. But just a suggestion 🙂
    Autumn held at bay

    1. atothewr Avatar
      atothewr

      That is a good idea. Never even thought of doing that.

      1. AJ Avatar
        AJ

        🙂 thank you. I m glad you do not think it an intrusion. Stayt blessed

      2. atothewr Avatar
        atothewr

        No intrusion. I’m a writer by trade so my skin is thick. I’m always open to some help.

      3. AJ Avatar
        AJ

        I’d like to be that (writer by trade). Heading for it. 🙂 cool. May you be a great one

      4. atothewr Avatar
        atothewr

        Have a great weekend. Thanks for the follow and the comment. I hope you get around to that writing thing.

      5. AJ Avatar
        AJ

        Likewise 🙂 best wishes

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